Tuesday, 2 April 2019

Queen apple

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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous3 May 2019 at 12:31

    What a creative piece of writing Naia! I love your imagination and willingness to write about different and unique things. Keep up the creative thinking and ideas!

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  2. Anonymous12 June 2019 at 14:52

    Hi my name is Luka Pierson from Kaniere School YOUR WAS SO AMAZING have you done more because you are so good at it. how many have you done?.

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  3. Anonymous17 June 2019 at 12:46

    hi my name is Naia thanks for commenting and I have only done 2

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  4. Anonymous13 August 2019 at 12:12

    Hi Naia,
    I like how you wrote a poem about an apple, as it is very creative and unique. This writing really shows you the real Naia! could you keep writing poems? You really have a talent for it.

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  5. Anonymous28 August 2019 at 09:17

    Hi
    That's great it really hooked me in and i really wanted to know more.
    Keep it up! Next time remember to add commas in some places.
    Thanks Ruby

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