Thursday, 28 March 2019

The Mysterious village

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora, I am I am Alivia Wright
    I really liked Naia I really liked You added lots of details and your writing.
    I learnt that you had of interesting words .

    Maybe you could Work on more paragraphs.

    Mā te wā. Alivia

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